Six panels: Sam rushes towards the door labeled "TRITIA'S SECRET CLUBHOUSE"; ze looks in, but it's dark inside. Inside, Tritia mischievously uses zir powers to slam the door behind Sam.
TRITIA: Now you're stuck in here with me!
SAM: When did you forget that WE'RE the ones chasing YOU?
NARRATION: MEANWHILE!
Montage (with no panel borders): Jeva ignores the steep staircase charges along the wall, using zir katana to slice long cuts into the wall, at a shallow ascending diagonal. Sparks fly everywhere.
JEVA: RRRAAAAGGGHHHH
Panel: Jeva stands in front of the ramp ze's just cut into the wall, huffing and puffing.
(hide transcript)This one took me around two hours (it took a little longer than that in total, but I had a few non-trivial interruptions).
I'm pretty happy with how well I've been able to express movement using this medium... at least, to myself. I wish I had a good way to measure how well it works for other people.
– Eli
Approximate readability: 4.44 (234 characters, 60 words, 4 sentences, 3.90 characters per word, 15.00 words per sentence)
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October 29, 2011 · Permalink
